Monday, August 8, 2016

Looking Forward to Your Vacation? Pt. 2: PLEASE TAKE ALONG YOUR BRAIN By Andrea Downing


What gets into people when they go on vacation?  Are we so relaxed that we don’t think straight?  There seems to be a plethora of incredibly stupid acts by people traveling, a number of which are occurring within our national parks.  Forget the idiotic speeding on our nation’s highways or the things college kids get up to when they get their school break.  I’m talking about otherwise normal and sane adults who just leave their brains at home.
I’m lucky enough to get to Yellowstone once a year, if not more, and it never ceases to amaze me how up close and personal one can get to the wildlife there—sometimes a bit too up close.  Most of us have now heard of the man and his son who put a baby bison in the back of their car to take to the rangers, thinking he looked cold.  Really?  I don’t know what to even say about the thought process  behind that one, although I learned they were from South Africa and that seems to be the norm over there.  Huh?
Cristal nervously sits in car as buffalo passes by

My daughter and I were on the road when a herd of bison came meandering down; the size of their heads alone is enough to put the fear of God into you.  But apparently not to some—take the woman who decided to snap a selfie with a bison, then was surprised when he knocked her over.  Actually, she was lucky, considering she expected a 2000 lb. animal to just stand there and behave.
Have a good look at the hot springs and geysers in the park and think about what it might be like to fall in.  Despite numerous signs warning visitors not to leave the walkways, there has already been a death in Yellowstone this year due to people leaving the boardwalks and going on to the delicate travertine terraces surrounding them.  Another visitor decided to stroll off to get a cup of medicinal sulphur water; that cup of water cost him a $1000 fine.  Luckily for him, he didn’t pay with his life.
Yellowstone:  would you leave the boardwalk?
The old adage of leave only footprints, take only photographs seems to be long forgotten in some circles.  On a list I found of fourteen incredibly stupid things tourists have done, a good number of them were desecrating monuments or memorials.  Two American sisters were deported from Cambodia after taking nude selfies in front of the sacred temples at Angkor Wat.  In my neck of the woods, people have scaled the Brooklyn Bridge to get a good shot of the New York skyline, and spilled coffee on the carved names at the Ground Zero Memorial. The list goes on.
Some of these idiocies have to do with people’s expectations and lack of knowledge, especially when it comes to traveling abroad.  I found several lists of things American tourists have said about their vacations, and it made me wonder, do we know nothing about geography, history, and other cultures?  Here’s a small sample:  “We went on holiday to Spain and had a problem with the taxi drivers as they were all Spanish”; “We went to a Mexican restaurant in Rome and the waiter was Italian. You assured us Italy was the best place for an authentic food experience”; "Why did the queen build Windsor Castle so close to Heathrow Airport?"; "How do I know which plane to get on? I was told my flight number is 823, but none of these darn planes have numbers on them"; “There was no sign telling you that you shouldn’t get on the hot air balloon ride if you’re afraid of heights”; “Although the brochure said that there was a fully equipped kitchen, there was no egg-slicer in the drawers.” 
So I leave you with one last word:  THINK!

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Saturday, August 6, 2016

Motive, goal or fiction? by Barbara Edwards


I’ve been plotting my next manuscript. While I’ve been building motivation for my hero and heroine for why they are acting they way they are, I got caught up in a news broadcast where the reporter was questioning the perpetrator’s motives. As I listened I though that no reader would accept that reasoning as valid. 

Wow. Real life doesn’t work in a book.

After laughing, I called a fellow author and shared my ‘insight’. She cautiously agreed with a big “but.”

A good author can take an unbelievable incident and turn it into a wonderful story. With believable characters.
So here I am. 
Motivation is an internal feeling what causes a person to seek a particular thing. It has to be something the reader can identify with and accept. It helps to build empathy. 
I don’t usually plot ahead but this story is the third in a series of books and I need to show the connections in an understandable way. 

Why does this heroine who is new, not a secondary character from book one or two, get so caught up in the adventure that she doesn’t flee for the hills? Not like a paranormal where I could use magic to twist her around. but a contemporary set in this time and place.

It doesn’t help that I’m having my own ‘adventure’ that wouldn’t make a believable novel. 

Aw well, I must focus. Now my question is, what is truly believable?
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Friday, August 5, 2016

The Flip Side of Paradise: Life in Fire Country by Alison Henderson

I grew up in Kansas then spent twenty-five years living in Minnesota. Over the years, I've learned how to prepare for and deal with tornadoes and blizzards. None of that prepared me for life in fire country. 

Since I retired at the end of 2012, and OG and I pulled up stakes and moved to Carmel Valley on the Central Coast of California, we've experienced several significant wildfires. Now, native Westerners are used to the annual cycle of wet and dry seasons, mudslides and fires. I'm not. Fire simply isn't the same kind of concern in the Midwest. Precipitation occurs throughout the year. The terrain is flat, and any fires are relatively easy to extinguish. Here, the same steep mountains, pine forests, and coastal scrub that make for spectacular scenery also make fires extremely difficult to fight.
Smoke line from our back deck several days ago



Map of fire 7/30/2016
On July 22nd, fire broke out in a canyon in Garrapata Park in Big Sur, about five miles south of Carmel. At first, I wasn't too concerned. I had no idea what happens when a wildfire has plenty of fuel and a mind of its own. I soon learned. It went from a plume of smoke on the horizon above the farthest visible ridge to a choking blanket of smoke, enveloping the entire community. As I write this, the fire has consumed 38K acres, destroyed 57 homes, and taken one life. By the time your read this, I'm sure it will be worse. We currently have 5,300 firefighters from up and down the entire West Coast working night and day, and the fire is still only 15% contained. We are told to expect the situation to last for weeks.

That seems to be to be the biggest difference between western wildfires and the kind of extreme natural events I grew up with. Tornadoes and blizzards feel finite. They're horrible, then they're done, and you start cleaning up. Huge wildfires can increase in size and ferocity every day for weeks, or even months. 

The effect on the psyche is much like being under siege. You try to go about your daily business, but nothing is the same, and reminders are everywhere. The sky is the wrong color; sometimes you can't breathe safely; and the house stinks of smoke. Everyone is stressed all the time, including the wildlife. The firefighters you see everywhere are saviors, but they're also daily reminders of how wrong things are.
Yes, that really is the sun.
 


This morning, after another difficult night that ended in a nightmare about a friend dying, I realized this is how far too many people in our world feel every day. Whether they live in crime-ridden neighborhoods in American cities or war zones half-way around the world, they suffer they grinding stress of living under constant threat. It's a testament to the strength of the human spirit that so many keep going, day after day, and still manage to find some pleasure or beauty in life.

It appears likely we have several more weeks of this ahead, but I keep reminding myself to shut up and smile. We could be in Aleppo.

Alison
www.alisonhenderson.com 



Thursday, August 4, 2016

The Barn by Christine DePetrillo

In my book, More Than Pancakes, the hero, Rick Stannard, builds barns during the off season of his maple syrup business. In my real life, The Husband built a barn for us.

And when I say he built a barn, I mean He. Built. A. Barn.

Have a look.

Carving beams.

Carving posts.

There were hundreds of these!

Starting to assemble the puzzle.

Erecting the bottom level.

Everything fits!

Adding the second floor.

Roof rafters (the only woodwork he didn't cut himself).

View from inside.

Weathering the winter.


Vinyl siding - what we're working on this summer. 

It's been so cool seeing this barn go from computerized sketches, to hundreds of interlocking pieces, to what is standing there today... and will hopefully be standing there for a long, long time. Now to fill it!

I've got a talented husband. Building stuff is one of his many superpowers. I think I'll keep him.

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Toodles, 

Chris
www.christinedepetrillo.weebly.com 

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Wednesday, August 3, 2016

Olympics, Brain Overload, and Publishing--Oh My! ~ Vonnie Davis

I always look forward to the Olympics. The best of every country competing. As a mother and grandma of youngsters who devoted themselves to various sports, I know the discipline and sacrifice they've given on the high school and collegiate levels. My grandson Ryan will be wrestling for MIT this winter--not that I'm bragging, mind you (Cheezy Grin)--the team's name? "Tough Nerds." I kid you not.

No one in my family has ever aspired to participate in the Olympics, but that doesn't deter from my enjoyment of the events. It's as if each athlete is a part of me. Yes, I am an emotional ninny.

I've been mentally bogged down of late. So much so, I feel as if my mind is a filing cabinet of storylines and I can't keep them straight. I literally have to ask myself what story I'm going to work on today. Hangs head in shame. Today I worked on three: The Roses Christmas short story, A Christmas novella, and a contemporary romance with a plot thinner than a sneeze. Oh, and a synopsis of a book I've yet to write; the fourth bear-shifter story in my Highlander Beloved series. I've no clue if I can generate interest in it, or not.

I'm trying because I've been getting a lot of emails from readers asking for more stories in the series. The latest was from an author who told me my bears were a topic of conversation at her local RWA chapter meeting. They probably wondered what kind of simple-minded fool would write a paranormal that didn't fit half of the rules. She gave me a list of the three shifters they wanted books about. One was married, but they wanted to hear how he met his love and got his HEA. I don't think I can convince my editor to go for all three, so I'll pitch one at a time.


If I were to label what kind of romances I write, I'd have to say anything but Regencies and futuristics. The variety of my published things makes it hard to market myself. My name is my brand. Most readers expect a certain level of humor in my stories. My editor tells me my humor should be greatly reduced, my plot lines are heavy, like my hips, aaaaand first person is preferable to third.

It's like the punch line:  "Just when I learn all the answers, they change the questions." Yeah, that's the state of publishing right about now.

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Forgive a proud grandma. My son made several slide shows to play at Ryan's high school graduation party. Unfortunately, Ryan is typically the shortest one in the group. Why do dark-haired wrestlers have blond hair in some of the pictures? They bleach their hair during districts and regionals. Ryan, who damaged his knee in the finals, took second place in the state at 170 pounds. Once the slide show starts, click on the arrows in the lower right corner so it goes full-screen and crank up the volume..
https://www.dropbox.com/s/tp8hrgrf4x51vcw/Friends%20-%20Good%20to%20Be%20Alive.mp4?dl=0

Tuesday, August 2, 2016

Subtle Distinctions in Romance Sub-Genres by Jannine Gallant

I've been doing a lot of thinking about subtleties. I know, hard to believe coming from me. I generally use a sledgehammer rather than kid gloves to make my point... However, I've been editing, and I've come to a few interesting conclusions.

What determines the sub-genre of a book? I used to think it was the content of the story. Does the plot have a strictly romantic conflict, or are there bad guys to contend with? I always maintained I couldn't write straight contemporary (except novella length) because I needed the suspense to fill out a full-length book. But, I'm starting to think content isn't the deciding factor in determining sub-genre.

I'm using our own Margo, my beleaguered CP, as my case in point. I'm approaching the end of her latest WIP in a frenzy of editing. This is book two of her Brothers-in-Blue series about cops who protect the women they love from creepy villains. Now, I've also had my grubby little mitts all over book one. My constant comments were that she needed more suspense elements to make these books true romantic suspense because something just felt off. Reading book two, I realized the number of bad-guy encounters wasn't the actual problem.

Why didn't these books feel like suspense? I finally came to the conclusion it's not plot but voice, tone, style--or maybe all of the above. It's the same reason I can't write straight contemporary, I don't have the right style. Margo delves into the romance and the deep emotions of her characters. She takes her  time telling their story. Me, I make people tired when they read my books because my pace is fast and furious. I don't delve. Neither style is wrong. They're just different. However, a quick pace lends itself to romantic suspense because it keeps the reader on edge. On the other hand, deeper emotions feels more contemporary.

So, despite the fact Margo is writing about cops and bad guys, my suggestion was she shop her series as contemporary with suspense elements. The only downside, she needs to add more S-E-X to make them really appealing as contemporaries. Always a downside... LOL

What do you all think? Does the content or the tone determine the sub-genre of a book? Is my theory out to lunch, or am I on to something? Please chime in.


And while we're on the subject of the second book in a series...Every Step She Takes, book two in my Who's Watching Now series is on sale for 99 cents. Get your copy on Amazon now. Or check out all my books on my Website.

Monday, August 1, 2016

Meet Aline, My Heroine in Cézanne’s Ghost, a Suspense Novel by Rolynn Anderson

Yippee!  Cezanne’s Ghost goes to my editor this weekend, giving me time to tweak the cover with my cover artist.  You have to understand I’m still uneasy at directing an artist about how to design a GREAT cover.  Matter of fact, you might want to read the following article about how fabulous cover-art is ‘developed’ in this article by E.Ayers… 

https://authorsofmainstreet.wordpress.com/2016/06/17/what-makes-for-a-good-cover/ 

Whoa!  Give me a Z; give me an I!  All these ideas are new to me…I’m still learning about how to judge a good cover, beyond “It’s balanced, the colors are fine…I like it!”

Last month I told you about my marvelous experience with another creator, a sketch artist (which happens to be the skill of my hero in Cézanne’s Ghost). Here’s what I said:  
“Jeff Haines, is the artist I contacted because I wanted to put one of his sketches on the cover of Cézanne’s Ghost.  When we first talked on e-mail, he said he hadn’t worked with a novelist who wanted cover art before.  Basically, he does custom drawings.  The price he gave me was impossible for me to pay, so I passed on the picture.  But I liked the picture so much, I decided to contact him and negotiate.  I explained to him how I would use the picture and the most money I’d ever make on the book.  He said he liked the artist-to-artist relationship and gave me I price I could pay.”

I promised I’d show you the sketch before I put it on my cover.  Here it is.  Her name is Aline, which was the name of Cézanne’s granddaughter.  I hope to show you the full cover very soon.  Since the manuscript goes to my editor this weekend, I get one day of celebration before I’ll start working on another novel I hope to release this year. 


So here’s Aline:

What's your favorite cover of all the books you've published?  Can you pick one?  Is it composed in an "I" or "Z" way?  

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