Christmas at Sinners-Part 1 By Rolynn Anderson
Looking for an UNSUB, an
unknown suspect, in a surprise snowstorm, was a challenge for L.A. native,
Sable Chisholm. She was a Law Enforcement Ranger at Mt. Rainier National Park,
a newly assigned L.E., and her first job in terrible weather was to find a guy
who’d robbed the tourist center. A masked man waved a gun at two terrified clerks,
took money, but didn’t fire his pistol. Might have taken off in a gray Camry.
No license number. Where the hell did he go?
Since it was eight o’clock on
Christmas Eve, only a few rangers were on duty. Chief Randle had sent Sable and
four other L.E’s out before the storm hit, singly in their Tahoe trucks, each
assigned different towns in search of the gray sedan. Local cops were on the
hunt, too, but they were understaffed this holiday season. Now stuck in traffic
in Ashford, Sable got orders via her car radio: “Stand down. 10-13. Wait out
the storm. Report your location.”
Sable was not an agent who
liked to wait, and she wasn’t afraid to skid down slick roads looking for a
criminal. In fact, if her boss hadn’t ordered her to desist, she would have continued
her pursuit, because an on-duty brain injury made her a relentless ranger. She’d
been poisoned a year ago by carbon monoxide seeping into a motel room where she
and her partner ran a stakeout. Billy had died; Sable’s amygdala, the part of
the brain controlling fear and flight/fight responses, was damaged. Weeks of
acting out, absent fear, had ruined her reputation in L.A. Months of work with
a therapist got her back to active duty and assigned to Mt. Rainier.
The chief’s orders were firm
and since a layer of ice under the snow-pack was yanking her car all over the
road, she gave in. She might be alarmless, but she’d learned how to check
recklessness. “If I’m stopping; let’s hope the perp will do the same.” Sable
turned right, sliding through the parking lot to a slot in front of the motel. Other
cars, swathed with snow so they looked like moguls on a ski slope, rested in
silence on her right and left. Was one of the autos a Camry belonging to the
robber? No way to tell.
She pulled on boots and plowed
through two feet of snow. Even though she kicked piled-up snow away from the
door, opening it took all her strength. As she shook flakes off her ranger hat
and brushed off her shoulders, she was surprised to be standing in a dark
vestibule, walls painted black, the room lit with a giant pink neon sign:
‘SINNERS.’
“Oops,” she said at the same
time a burly guy emerged, his shiny baldhead colored peach by the neon.
“Ranger,” he said in a
not-happy-to-see-her tone. “What’s up?”
“Law Enforcement Ranger Chisholm.
You are?”
“Spike. Taylor. Partner of
Sinners.”
She winced. “I thought there
might be room in the ‘inn,’ until I read the whole title of your establishment.
I suspect this is more than a motel, or…perhaps, less?”
“No vacancies at Sinners.”
She peeked behind the entry
wall. A smoky bar, full of men. The smell of French fries tinged with beer and
Pine Sol wafted her way, reminding her she’d skipped dinner. Her stomach
growled and Spike’s eyebrow went up at the sound.
“Where are the women?” Sable asked.
Spike’s expression tightened.
“Asleep? Watching The Christmas Story in their rooms?”
“We’ve got a criminal on the
loose, with a gun,” she said. “Nobody can drive these roads, not even a
desperate man. Which guys came in recently?”
“These men are here for the
same reason you are. All but a couple regulars showed up in the last hour.”
She surveyed the foyer and
considered the lounge she’d seen behind the wall. “You retrofitted the motel
caretaker’s house into a bar, motel rooms attached.”
“Full service on Highway 706.”
“Right now I don’t care
what’s going on in your motel rooms unless my guy’s in one of them. He robbed
the park visitors’ center, armed.”
He stared at her.
Sable was quiet for a moment,
considering her options. She couldn’t leave the premises because of the crappy
weather and neither could the criminal if he was hanging out in the bar or in
one of the rooms. Her cop feelers hinted her UNSUB was here, but how was she
going to find him?
A small Christmas tree
artfully designed out of coat hangers, stood on the counter, its tiny lights
blinking green, urging a soft strategy. She
stuffed her hat on a shelf under the tree. Next came her Kevlar vest and
equipment belt. Once she’d tucked her gun into her sock, she said, “Don’t touch
my belt.”
“Wait,” Spike said, eyes
rounding when she began to unbutton her ranger-issue shirt.
Sable threw the shirt in the
shelf and straightened her t-shirt. “You keep your mouth shut about who I am or
I close your business for months. Today, I don’t want you, I want my gun-toting
UNSUB.”
Spike nodded slowly,
open-mouthed.
She swept up her
shoulder-length hair and crunched it into a hair clip. “I’m going in there. Story
is: My car’s stuck in a snow bank and I need a tow.”
He nodded again. “I won’t say
who you are, but I’m not going to save your ass in there.”
“No problem.” A smile, then:
“Let’s see what songs a room full of trapped drunk men will sing.”
Spike flipped a hand at her.
“Have at it, ranger.”
Thanks for reading Part 1 of my Christmas story. Part 2 comes tomorrow...stay tuned!
18 comments:
What a stopping point. Way to go, Rolynn. She’s going in...
I see her pole dancing to "Baby, It's Cold Outside." What a nice turn with the opening line. What a great imagination you have.
Oh this is fun!
Wow, you packed a lot in that first installment. Love a kickass and take no names hero, and you can tell Sable is sharpening up the toe of her boot.
Nice little turn with the 'inn' thing. I'm intrigued. I enjoy reading about Sable and glad she's making another appearance.
Nice! I can't wait to see what happens tomorrow!
Sable is such an interesting character. I can't wait to learn more about her!
I've been on the road...from Palm Springs to Scottsdale today...just getting the chance to answer. Thanks for the compliment, Margo. She IS going in!
Vonnie...you surely know how to compliment a writer...I SO want to be seen as imaginative. Pole dancing? You've given me an idea for her next foray!
Fun is my aim, Brenda. Thanks!
Dang...sharpening her boot...why didn't I think of that? Do you hire as a consultant? :-)
Thanks, Alicia. Sable is a fun character to write about. She's fearless...which can be problematic!
Jannine, I always hope to surprise the reader...tell me if I do that to you!
Thanks, Alison. As I've said, she's my main character for three novels...at least. She's that fun to write about!
"Inn" to "Sinners!" Brilliant! I love it and Sable.
Thanks, Chris. We gotta keep our readers surprised, right?
Ooh, this is so good, Rolynn. I'm totally hooked. I recognized Sable. Glad she has enough common sense to offset her lack of fear. Can't wait for tomorrow.
Bless your heart, Diane. Yup, Sable's therapist helped her build a Do List...to offset her fearlessness. Too bad the list doesn't cover unforeseen challenges :-)
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