Don’t you just love a good wedding? I love weddings so
much that my second book, A Man Like That, begins and ends
with two weddings—of the same couple—five months apart.
The opening lines explain why:
Weston,
Missouri
October,
1866
Clusters of yellow chrysanthemums
glowed on the altar. Organ music piped in the background. Wedding guests
murmured in the sanctuary. Every detail was perfect, except one.
Hoops swaying beneath her ivory silk
gown, Jessamine Randall paced the length of the tiny anteroom of the Weston
Baptist Church clutching the mass of limp threads that had once been her
favorite lace handkerchief. Every few steps, she paused to bat at the lone
copper curl that escaped its pin and dangled in front of her nose.
Back and forth, Jessy marched past
the other two occupants of the room without acknowledging their presence. She
caught her lower lip between her teeth and turned her head toward the door. The
muffled din of the guests in the sanctuary had grown to a jabbering chorus. She
stopped pacing.
Where in heaven’s name was Morgan?
You guessed it. She’s been stood up at the altar. Now
some young women might withdraw into seclusion to lick their wounds, but not
Jessy. She takes off alone in the middle of the night, headed deep into the
Ozark Mountains in pursuit of the ex-outlaw she knows is her perfect match,
even if he refuses to admit it.
She catches up with Morgan, but he resists because he
believes Jessy is much too good for a man like him. She eventually gives in to
frustration and discouragement and returns to her parents. When Morgan realizes
what he’s lost and comes after her, she initially refuses him.
He reached out and pulled her into
his arms. “You’ve been trying to bully me since the day I first laid eyes on
you.”
She wriggled against his embrace. “I
have—”
“—and I expect you to keep it up
every day for the rest of our lives. His lips came down on hers, silencing her
protest. They lingered and caressed, promised and enticed.
“I love you, Jessy,” he whispered
next to her ear. “I fought it, but you’ve known all along, haven’t you?”
“I was afraid I might be wrong.” Her
response was breathless because he was kissing the soft skin of her neck
beneath her ear.
“You were wrong, wrong to fall in
love with a worthless, no-good outlaw like me. But you were never wrong about
my feelings for you. Never….Jessy, I was nothing before I met you. I was less
than nothing. If there’s any good in me at all, it’s because of you. You make
me want to be more than I’ve ever been. I want to be good, good enough for you.”
I ask you, what woman wouldn’t want to hear that? Of
course, Jessy is persuaded and they marry the next day.
I read romance for the happily-ever-after endings, and I
write it for the same reason. As a reader, I feel that some authors give the
ending short shrift, almost as if it’s a given so why bother. I like to take my
time with the conclusion. After all, by that time, the reader has been through
hundreds of pages of ups and downs with the characters. Everyone (including me!)
deserves to savor their final happiness. And how better to do that than with a
wedding?
Alison
http://alisonhenderson.blogspot.com
7 comments:
Beautiful excerpts, Alison. It is nice to savor the time your characters are allowed to really show how much they care for each other. You've inspired me. I'll try to do more of that with my future books.
Terrific excerpts! Go Jessy. You have to love a heroine who knows what she wants and goes after it!
Margo, I get all warm and fuzzy writing endings. That's what makes it all worthwhile!
Hi, Jannnine. Jessy is one of my favorite heroines. She's unsinkable!
I adore moments that make me sigh. And you're right, as authors, we need to take more time with our endings. You've just given me a new goal.
Vonnie, there's just not enough sighing these days. We need to do our part to remedy that! :-)
I love happy endings. This sounds perfect.
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