Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Know Life by Brenda Whiteside

The way to know life is to love many things ~ Van Gogh

I started life as an artist. As far back as memory serves me, the need to fill empty white space with color drove me. But I wanted to fill that white space like Lautrec, not Van Gogh. Although, I like Van Gogh (so did Lautrec. They were friends), I much prefer Lautrec. When I think of his renderings, strong characters come to mind. Van Gogh brings to mind images of landscapes.

Eventually, after a creative writing class, filling white space with words satisfied me more painting. I prefer creating character driven novels so Lautrec and I are still kindred spirits.

Lautrec and Van Gogh both lived rather tortured lives. The fact the quote is attributed to Van Gogh is touching. I'm guessing he loved and gave love far more than he received. But if you are familiar with his work, you can see he had to have loved many things to create such beauty.

Here are ten of my loves - and I'm concentrating on "things" rather than people.
1. the sound of rain on the roof
2. the taste of a full flavored cabernet
3. mountains
4. a baby's laugh
5. denim
6. 60's rock and roll
7. an Arizona sunset
8. the smell of coffee and bacon
9. a road trip
10. flowers blooming in the garden

What do you love that will lead you to know life?

Brenda's latest release is Southwest of Love and Murder, book two in her Love and Murder Series.



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Monday, February 23, 2015

Writing and the Inevitable Rough and Bumpy Road by Margo Hoornstra

The way to know life is to love many things ~ Van Gogh



If I may paraphrase ~ The way to know a work in progress is to write many things.

Composing, revising, polishing, proofing. The road from initial story idea to completed manuscript is not only lengthy, but fraught with false starts, detours and any number of  potholes to jar body and soul combined.

Those chapters constructed with such care and strict adherence to the concepts of goal, motivation and conflict that have to be ditched because they just don’t move the story forward. That complicated, epic length manuscript, that was supposed to have been a simple short story. Or vice versa.

I know a little something about the latter. Not too long ago, I whittled a 70 thousand word novel that didn’t sell down to a 40 thousand word that did. Humbling? You bet. But, surprisingly, not all that difficult to accomplish.

For those of you who are writers, which facet of writing do you find harder to do? To write an original draft, tell the story you want to tell – no holds barred. Or to go back through and rewrite that draft until it’s, well, polished to perfection?

As far as I’m concerned, the rewrites are far more daunting than the actual writing. In the rewrite phase there are rules to be followed, guidelines to adhere to. Being in the throes of a minor overhaul of a once completed (or so I thought) novel may have something to do with my current choice.

The, what I have come to refer to as my WIP Repeat, was originally rejected by an editor who, before this, had accepted everything I offered her. Among the reasons for her no thanks: Not enough conflict, bad guy who wasn’t bad enough, and the ever present—in my writing at least—too much flowery language.

After recovering from any author’s reaction to rejection unbelievable shock followed by near crippling disappointment, I got to work on the suggested rewrites.

In my opinion, there’s a lot of good material in the original I’m trying to preserve and weave into revised story arcs. Except, I’m haunted by some rewrite advice from a workshop I took long ago.  "If you have a line you simply love and can’t do without, cut it, get it out of there. You’ll be better off in the long run."

I think I’m learning the hard way how true that statement is. Yet I’m confident, eventually this manuscript will all come together. Much of it already has. I will get there with a submission worthy work. Until then . . . let’s just say I sure am ready to have this WIP Repeat behind me.

Then, as I begin that inevitable next one, I am so looking forward to having that good old blank page in front of me once again. Because we all know that next one is really the best. The one that isn’t even started yet. The one still happily floating out there somewhere with the rest of our still to be fulfilled dreams.

The one of many things—writing wise—we truly, dearly love.

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Sunday, February 22, 2015

This couple needs a sequel! By Leah St. James



The course of true love never did run smooth.  ~ William Shakespeare

Today I’m telling the story of a workaholic, money-conscious husband and a lonely, empty-nester wife. After more than a couple decades of marriage, he’s not paying enough attention, to anything, at home. She’s just looking for love, of any kind, in all the wrong places.

Sounds like any number of books of commercial or literary fiction, doesn’t it?  In fact, it could read like a Shakespearean tragedy: a couple of noble but flawed protagonists placed under terrible stress who make a decision that brings them to their knees.

The description, from Wikipedia, couldn’t be any more perfect for my couple. Except that they’re not fictional. They’re real.

I’m talking about Bob and Maureen McDonnell, former governor and first lady of Virginia.
For those of you unfamiliar with the story, back in 2009, Bob McDonnell was elected Governor of Virginia by a 17-point margin over Democratic nominee Creigh Deeds. As governor, McDonnell was known as a lion for fiscal conservancy and restraint, a reputation that put him on the fast track to the heights of the Republican party, even being rumored as one of Mitt Romney’s potential running mates in 2012. While he wasn’t selected, his name at the time, and for a short while afterward appeared, on many lists of the party’s potential future presidential nominees.

From the outside, those must have been heady days in McDonnell’s world. But trouble was brewing behind the scenes early on.

His wife, Maureen, was lonely. While husband Bob was climbing the ladder of Virginia politics, Maureen shied from the limelight, according to published reports. But she was interested—really, really interested—in food supplements. (Hey, we all have our passions, right?)

And she was lonely. The youngest of her children had flown the coop, and she was left with time on her hands. 

Enter businessman Jonnie Williams, CEO of Star Scientific, a Virginia supplement maker that was researching uses for anatabine, a substance found in the tobacco plant. Star Scientific wasn’t doing too well, and Williams was looking for backing for its two anatabine-based products. When he met Maureen McDonnell – First Lady of Virginia and lover of supplements – his pupils must have lit up with dollar signs. 



Whether you believe he wooed her and drew her in, or she became needy and greedy—or both—by the time he was done, Williams spent something like $175,000 on the McDonnells. When she complained, bitterly, that she was too broke to buy a new gown for her husband’s inauguration—because the governor-elect was too tight-fisted and they’d maxed out their credit cards—Williams stepped in and gave her money. 


He gave the family gifts, toolike a Rolex watch, vacations and golf outings, use of his private aircraft and Ferrari.  He gave a huge chunk of cash for a McDonnell daughter’s wedding reception. He took Maureen McDonnell on a shopping trip for designer clothes in Manhattan and made substantial loans to the family’s floundering real estate company. 

In turn, Mrs. McDonnell spoke at a Star Scientific investor event in Florida, with her husband’s blessing, and announced that she had offered the governor’s mansion for use of a launch party for Anatabloc, one of Star’s products. The governor’s office also facilitated meetings between Star Scientific and the Virginia Tobacco Commission for purposes of funding more research. According to the indictment, it was even suggested (by Williams, I believe) to use Virginia’s public employees  as a control group for Anatabloc. (What?!)

Somehow neither McDonnell thought it inappropriate to put the muscle of the office behind Star Scientific’s product while/after receiving all those gifts and loans. His campaign slogan was the “Bob for Jobs” after all, and he wanted to bring industry to the state. The governor was even quoted as saying (paraphrasing): The stuff works for me! (From what I read, for each of these gifts, the governor either thought it fell outside financial disclosure requirements...or he forgot.)

Before too long, rumors started to leak, a federal investigation was launched, and Williams flipped on both McDonnells, signing a plea deal that allowed him to walk free. In January 2014 both Bob and Maureen McDonnell were indicated on multiple counts of fraud.

And what was their defense?  That it was the first lady who laid the foundation for the corruption that followed, not because she was a bad person (although painted pretty much a shrew), but because, lonely and neglected while her husband took the spotlight, she had developed a crush on Johnnie Williams.  

Williams lavished her with gifts. He listened to her problems....and he fixed them. Williams was her new knight in shining armor.

The case went to trial quickly, and in late September, the McDonnells were convicted on multiple counts. Recent sentencing hearings resulted in two years in prison for the former governor, one year and a day for his wife. 

During her sentencing hearing last week, Maureen McDonnell apologized, saying she had made a terrible mistake and had allowed a serpent into the governor’s mansion. “And the venom from that snake has poisoned my marriage, has poisoned my family and has poisoned the commonwealth that I love.” (Read more about her sentencing here.)

It just makes me sad. As headline-making as their problems are, at their most basic level, they sound typical of so many marriages, don’t they? Not enough money to cover the lifestyle the couple wants. Not enough attention to/from one or the other. Just not enough, period.

The romance author in me can’t help but wonder what would have happened if they hadn’t lost sight of their love somewhere along the climb to political power. 

What if the governor had listened to his wife – shrewishness aside? What if they had tried to work on their financial issues instead of taking the easy (and slimy) way of a handout from a guy looking for a payback? 

So if the McDonnells’ course of love wasn’t one heck of a bumpy ride, I don’t know whose is. 

Maybe they can write a come-back sequel after they serve their time, one that has them holding hands at a beachside resort (that THEY paid cash for), enjoying grandchildren, conducting classes for upcoming politicians. The course would be entitled "What NOT to do While Serving in Public Office 101."

That's the sequel I'd write. What about you?

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Leah St. James writes stories of mystery and romance, good and evil and the redeeming power of love. Read more at LeahStJames.com

Thursday, February 19, 2015

So Many Things to Love, so Little Time

The way to know life is to love many things ~ Van Gogh

I'd never heard this quote, and I am not into art, but I must say, Van Gogh is spot on. I believe a person's life is richer the more things, and people, they love. I have friends and family who have not tapped in to their interests, their passion, and they do not seem as happy or fulfilled as they should be. I probably love too many things. :) Of course, there's the reading and writing. But, I also have a lot of other interests that take time away from the reading and writing. I love watching tv, movies, sports. I love traveling. At one time, I played golf, but I am afraid I've let that fall by the wayside, and I miss it a great deal. I also have a ton of friends and family I enjoy spending time with. 


I think it's important to give our characters things to love, which is something I often forget. We need to remember that they are real, living, breathing, 3 D humans who have likes and dislikes just like we do. When I remember to do this, my characters become more real and I can more easily connect to them. I am not great at developing characters and filling out long, involved character worksheets, but if I ask myself a few questions, other than the standard, physical appearance, age, occupation, family life, etc, it helps to round out the people in my story: (It's also helpful to do this for villains)

Who is his or her favorite person to spend time with and why? Favorite place to be?
What is his or her favorite movie, hobby, music, food? If they could have any occupation in the world, what would it be and why?
What is the character doing when they are not 'on screen' in the story?
What is the character's greatest wish? Greatest fear? Greatest flaw? Greatest quality?
Probably most important: What is their core need? Not the obvious goal, but really, deep down, why they have that goal. For example, my goal for my character in Without Mercy was to protect her child. Of course, obviously, every mother wants to protect her child, but deep down, China was even more motivated to do so because she grew up the child of missionary parents who were away a great deal and didn't put her first. She's determined that her daughter will not feel abandoned like she did.

Think about the character in your latest manuscript. What is their core need and how does it drive them?




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Blurb:

How far will a mother go to protect her child?

When an apparently random bank robbery turns out to be a sinister plan, single mother China Beckett is thrust into a nightmare.

A group of mercenaries take over her life, threatening her young daughter and everyone they love. Each time China makes a mistake, someone dies. She’ll fight to the last breath to protect her child, but that might not be enough. 

As the lives of China’s loved ones are jeopardized, she must take action, although she has no idea where to turn—and time is running out. But then, a startling truth is revealed and China discovers that the only person who can save them might be a ghost from the past.

Excerpt:


“The robbery was only a small part. You will know more when the time is right. Right now, all you have to know is that we expect complete obedience.”

“Obedience? You invaded my home. Threatened my life. My daughter’s life.” China ran a shaky hand through her hair and shook her head. “You want me to do what you say and won’t even tell me why you’re doing this. This is too bizarre. Too much. I can’t—” She sighed, shook her head again. “I can’t do this. I don’t understand why.”

“Perhaps this will help.” Royce motioned with his hand, and Marcel came around to place the laptop case on the table. He slid out a computer and booted it up. His stubby fingers clicked a few times on the keyboard before he turned the laptop around facing her and Royce.

The screen filled with what seemed to be a live feed of a coffee shop. At a small round table next to the window, a professionally dressed man and woman leisurely sipped from cups. Only a few other patrons were in camera range. One was a teenage boy who stood behind the couple, staring up at the menu; the other a young mother with two small children at a table nearby. China frowned. She didn’t know any of them. “I don’t know what you want. What am I supposed to be looking at?”

“Which one?” Royce asked.

“Which one what?”

Royce tapped a finger on the screen, first on the man, then his female companion. “Which one do you want to die?”

Wednesday, February 18, 2015

How Much Conflict is too Much? by Jannine Gallant

The course of true love never did run smooth. ~ William Shakespeare

I think we all agree conflict makes a book interesting. But is there such a thing as too much conflict? Most straight contemporaries are driven by internal conflict. Boy meets girl. They have major issues (past pain, goals, beliefs, etc.) that keep them apart. They work through these problems and reach their HEA. In suspense, much of the conflict is external. Sure they have a few internal issues, but the serial killer stalking the heroine is generally the biggest deterrent to their HEA. These books are likely to be more plot driven. The contemporaries are usually character driven. Then there are historicals. (Yes, I'm leaving out a bunch of other sub-genres because these are the only ones I write! LOL)


My historical are a mishmash of internal and external conflict. They're character and plot driven. In a nutshell, I threw everything I could at my poor hero and heroine and told them to deal with it! In An Uncertain Destiny, Megan was brought up in the old Celtic religion to worship the Mother Goddess. Nicholas was raised in Puritan New England and believes in an angry God with fire and brimstone and eternal damnation for those who don't conform. He is promised to another woman and is driven by duty. She is a free-spirit with no patience for intolerance. That's probably enough internal conflict to carry a book, right? Except I didn't stop there. Oh, no. I tossed in a contingent of angry town folk who throw Megan in jail for being a witch and condemn her to hang. During the big escape, Nicholas is seriously wounded. Megan flees to an unknown destination to save him from the drama and danger surrounding her.

Yep, that's a LOT of external conflict to go with the internal dilemma. Too much, or do readers enjoy seeing the h&h tortured unmercifully at the hands of a sadistic author? Tell us what you think. And if you're wondering if Megan and Nicholas ever manage to find their HEA, well, you'll have to read the book! Just click HERE.

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Tuesday, February 17, 2015

Great Opening Lines by Betsy Ashton

The course of true love never did run smooth. ~ William Shakespeare

As writers, we are taught, no, have it beaten into us, that we need a great hook to begin a story. I'm going to tell you a story. You tell me if this is a good hook or not.

She: I'm too exhausted to go out tonight. I want to stay in the hotel and soak in a hot bath.

Girlfriend: You have to eat. Let's go to this cool club, have dinner and you can go home.

She (reluctantly): Okay.

Later, the meal is consumed and She is still tired.

She: I'm going to the bathroom before I take the subway back to the hotel.

Girlfriend: Go ahead. I'm going to dance.

She stands in a long line. He notices her.

He: When you get done in there, do you want to dance?

Yes, dear Roses, my hubs asked me to dance when I waiting to get into the bathroom. Suave? Maybe. It worked.

What was the best hook a guy used with you? Did it work?

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Betsy Ashton is the author of Mad Max Unintended Consequences available on Amazon and Barnes and Noble. The second book in the series, Uncharted Territory comes out in e-book in June 2015.

Monday, February 16, 2015

Success, Ford Style by Donna Michaels

Coming together is a beginning, staying together is progress, and working together is success. ~ Henry Ford 

Henry’s saying is true for many things, certainly for business. I’m living proof. Take the Cowboy 12-Pack boxed set.  Just last fall, I was approached to join, and in the beginning, it started out as eight authors, but ultimately ended up with twelve. Staying together we made progress, and by working together, before and after release day, we enjoyed success. So, Henry was right. We came together, stayed together, and worked together, and the end result landed us on both the NY Times and USA Today Bestseller’s lists!
 
 

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Mr. Ford’s quote also holds true for writing romance. Take my upcoming Feb. 19th release, WYNE AND CHOCOLATE.  Both the hero and heroine have trust issues, his from abandonment, hers from abuse. Coming together, staying together, and working through their demons together, made their relationship a success. I do love an HEA! Especially, when chocolate is involved. How about you? 
 
 

 Pre-Order/Buy Link:  http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00PULHSAO

I’m involved in a great Multi-author Valentine’s Day Giveaway, going on until the 20th, with winners drawn on the 21st. There are a ton of prizes, along with the Grand Prize of a Kindle Fire! Check it out for a chance to win!
Good luck,
~Donna