tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9023937099212820339.post4824943545621276018..comments2024-03-27T01:07:03.944-04:00Comments on The Roses of Prose: Undead For The HolidayAlison Hendersonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12725250883303287946noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9023937099212820339.post-45271232597562344142018-12-16T09:18:56.185-05:002018-12-16T09:18:56.185-05:00Wow, I lost a few days, but I'm glad, because ...Wow, I lost a few days, but I'm glad, because now I don't have to wait for the next part. I am soooo hooked. I love your voice, I love the tension and the way you've shown so much about her in a short time. Great job!Alicia Deanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003539473772776004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9023937099212820339.post-3431254659183495342018-12-15T14:50:03.728-05:002018-12-15T14:50:03.728-05:00Intriguing start! I like the first person pov.Intriguing start! I like the first person pov.Christine DePetrillohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00527942532875216883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9023937099212820339.post-48744641664007460692018-12-15T09:40:12.451-05:002018-12-15T09:40:12.451-05:00Wills has my curiosity and heart and you really de...Wills has my curiosity and heart and you really describe Holly's self talk like you know her well. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01492179785104235938noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9023937099212820339.post-8410791974310513482018-12-14T15:00:56.879-05:002018-12-14T15:00:56.879-05:00Thanks for all the nice comments! Tomorrow, let me...Thanks for all the nice comments! Tomorrow, let me know if your guesses are correct.remullinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02803012686654154333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9023937099212820339.post-15938326874936381162018-12-14T14:33:36.195-05:002018-12-14T14:33:36.195-05:00Great opening, Robin! I love your description of h...Great opening, Robin! I love your description of her fuzzy-headed-ness before Wills pulls her from the car. Fantastic. And I have my own ideas about why he dumped her. Looking forward to tomorrow's chapter.Leah St. Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11004006100786260893noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9023937099212820339.post-2126601450225299042018-12-14T11:16:42.951-05:002018-12-14T11:16:42.951-05:00Oh, no! I don't know enough about good bites ...Oh, no! I don't know enough about good bites and bad bites and if a good one cancels out the bad one. I'm really nervous for Holly...seems like Will is, too. Regret and sadness so far...hope these two find happiness! Great start!Rolynn Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09504770204968969467noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9023937099212820339.post-84900666371832736932018-12-14T10:13:28.258-05:002018-12-14T10:13:28.258-05:00I'm thinking I know why he dumped her. I can&#...I'm thinking I know why he dumped her. I can't wait to see if I'm right! See you tomorrow.Jannine Gallanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01047728297429025804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9023937099212820339.post-88885871618984609442018-12-14T09:43:04.418-05:002018-12-14T09:43:04.418-05:00This beginning raises all kinds of questions. Terr...This beginning raises all kinds of questions. Terrific. Will sounds like a compassionate man. After 10 years, he recognizes her immediately and wants to help her. You describe her terror so well. Can't wait for tomorrow's episode.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9023937099212820339.post-36641209143920201582018-12-14T09:32:45.820-05:002018-12-14T09:32:45.820-05:00What an intriguing beginning. I'm glad Wills i...What an intriguing beginning. I'm glad Wills is showing her some human kindness. Sounds like she needs it.Vonnie Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04636934830795471572noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9023937099212820339.post-41931873833354856692018-12-14T09:15:35.715-05:002018-12-14T09:15:35.715-05:00I think I should stick in a quick note of apology ...I think I should stick in a quick note of apology to my editor. After she sent it back, I got a wild hair and changed a bunch of stuff. I was too embarrassed to send it back to her at such a late date. Therefore, any resulting errors in tense, punctuation, etc are mine and mine alone. remullinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02803012686654154333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9023937099212820339.post-78240832574990694172018-12-14T09:15:06.958-05:002018-12-14T09:15:06.958-05:00I can't wait for the twists this is going to s...I can't wait for the twists this is going to surely have. Great beginning.Brenda Whitesidehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04162555468154752820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9023937099212820339.post-46344354938169907192018-12-14T06:33:38.652-05:002018-12-14T06:33:38.652-05:00Wow! Poor Holls. I have a feeling Wills is going t...Wow! Poor Holls. I have a feeling Wills is going to rise to the occasion. Whatever that may be.Margo Hoornstrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00036077481652050799noreply@blogger.com