“What’s
the second?” Nicholas asked.
“What?”
“You
said number one, looking too young. What’s your number two problem, Marie?” Her
hesitation was obvious. “Come on. It’s dark and no one is here but me.”
“I
can’t trust anyone anymore.” Her tone was sullen. “No one tells me the truth. All
the people around me are playing parts.”
Isn’t everyone?
“What part are you playing?”
“I’m…not.”
“Yes,
you are. Just like everyone else.” Except for him, of course, although he’d let
her believe him a shrink. “I say we both come clean.”
“Okay,
you first.”
He
took a deep breath. Maybe those repeated requests for his honesty had sunk in,
and he could be upfront with her. In the dark. “I think you’re probably nicer
than you let on, and not a spoiled brat under that façade.”
“Is
that what you meant by coming clean?”
“Young
lady –”
“I
think you’re as stuffy as this elevator.”
“You
are a brat.” Uncharacteristic for him
to be so blunt, but enough was enough. He was as much fun as the next person
who’d spent years in the cold, only being needed once a year, keeping all his
real gifts bottled up without appreciation. “I’ve sky dived.”
“No.
I don’t believe it.”
“Yes,
I have.”
She
nudged him. Her tiny shoulder was pointy against his forearm. “Tell me more.”
Her
interest was a light in the dark. “A few years ago, before…never mind.” He
cleared his throat. “A few years ago, I spent a week in the Rockies, with only
what I could carry on my back. I nearly drowned, white water rafting.”
“Oh,
my gosh. I would never have guessed.”
“I’ve
done a great many daring and dangerous things.” Memories flooded in, seeming
more real than the present. “Once a year…well, I try to mix it up now and then,
although messing up the routine isn’t advised, I am told. I have a great many
advisors. But they’re really small people and don’t know it.” He should tell
them that. They’d have to listen. But then, they were always listening. His
life of late was more like sitting in this elevator, immobile. No light. Only
mellow elevator music.
“Nick—”
“Shh…listen.
It’s the Rolling Stones. Now that is blasphemous.”
Marie
giggled. “I love the Stones.”
“I
got halfway backstage at their concert before security stopped me.”
“Nick!”
She leaned into him.
He
laughed. A real laugh. None of that ho, ho, ho they expected.
“Give
me your hand,” she demanded.
“My
hand?”
“Come
on. You can trust me.” She leaned into him again, her hand on his arm. “Give me
your hand.”
Feeling
silly, he complied. Without warning she stood and pulled him with her.
“Let’s
dance.”
“Oh,
I don’t think—”
“Come
on. No one is here to see us.” Her laughter was contagious. “We can’t even see
ourselves.”
Chuckling,
self-consciously, he followed her lead. They held hands. At first awkward, he relaxed
and imagined they danced in perfect sync. A subtle breeze brushed his face, her
twirling and laughter disturbing the stale elevator air.
“You’re
a lovely girl, Marie Louise.”
“Oh,
sure. In the dark, I’m a real looker.” She let go his hands. “I’m realistic.
Remember?”
“Whoa. Stop a minute.” He stilled. “Now you give
me your hand.” Using her hand as a
guide, he placed his fingers on her shoulder and turned her to face where the
mirror would reflect them, if it weren’t so dark. “Now look closely and tell me
you don’t see a beautiful young lady.”
“I
don’t see a beautiful young lady. You’re only being kind and a little bit
crazy.”
“I’m
hardly ever kind to anyone over the age of nine.” Giving, however you could,
that was the important thing. “Look at your gorgeous hair—the color of the sky
when the moon is hiding on a cold snowy night. I can see it even in the dark.
And your eyes are the color of tree bark against a white landscape. Your face
has been kissed with tiny little freckles.” As he spoke, he imagined wrapping
up his words with a big red ribbon. “How can you not see yourself? I don’t
think you’re as realistic as you say you are. You are a lovely, adorable,
intelligent, attractive young woman.”
“I
am?” The words barely whispered, she intoned awe.
“You
are from this moment forward.”
“Thank
you.”
A
loud ring choked off the sound of her appreciation. The phone call he hoped for—although
the miracle he needed wouldn’t happen.
“Oh good
grief, Nick. It’s the phone.”
In
harmony, the lights chimed in on the second ring. He turned and fumbled with
the half-opened door of the telephone cubby, grabbing the receiver. “Hello.
Hello.”
“This
is security. We’re going to get you out of there soon. Are you okay?”
“Yes.
Fine.”
“Are
you alone or does there happen to be a Mrs. Marie Le Mare with you?”
“Mrs.
Le Mare? No. Her name is Marie, but her
last name is Smith.”
She
covered her mouth in a giggle and shook her head.
“Well,
I might have misunderstood. Let me ask her. Is your last name Le Mare?”
Still
giggling with both hands to her face she nodded.
“Apparently,
her last name is Le Mare. We’ll be waiting.” He replaced the receiver and spun
around. “You lied.”
With
a whir, the elevator gave a jerk, knocking him off balance. He grabbed the
rail.
Her
giggles turned into full laughter.
“You’re
a brat.”
“Now,
Nick. Don’t be angry. If I’d told you my name was Marie Louise Le Mare, you
would’ve treated me differently.”
“You’re
right! I read a lot of newspapers in the workshop while they’re making the
toys.”
“Toys?
What are you—”
“You’re
the young bride. Married a millionaire old enough to be your father.”
“And
we wouldn’t have had near as much fun, if you’d known.” Frowning, she tilted
her head to the side. “I get tired of being treated like...like…I could break
or something. Besides, playing mind games with you was just too tempting.” She
punched his shoulder and smiled. “And you have to admit, we had fun.”
He
couldn’t admit anything else. He squinted. The overhead lights did the wave
through her hair again. “Yes, Marie, we had fun.”
Seconds
later, the door opened and a short, over-weight man in gray coveralls greeted
them. Two men in white coats stood behind him.
“Hey!
Hope you folks are okay. Sorry it took so long, Mrs. Le Mare. Your husband said
he’ll be right down.”
The
two white coats stepped forward, one holding a hand out to Nicholas. “Well,
Harry. Looks like you had an adventure today. Are you feeling okay?”
He
recognized them. Too bad they hadn’t sent one of his helpers. These two guys
wouldn’t be fooled. The attendant who’d waited for him after his session had
been too busy playing games on his cell. Slipping past him had posed no
challenge at all.
“I’m
great. But I don’t know why you insist on calling me Harry.” He ignored the
hand offered and stepped between them. “I haven’t missed the Snow Ball, have
I?”
“No,
no.” The short one smiled. “The Snow Ball wouldn’t be the same without you.”
They
were nice enough fellows, even if confused about his identity.
He turned
to face Marie. Her eyes opened wide and her lips parted in a question. Before
he could say goodbye, a shout rose behind them.
“Marie!
Thank God you’re okay.” A salt-and-pepper-haired man in a well-cut navy suit strode
over.
Ah, the rich husband.
Embracing
her, he kissed both of her cheeks. “I’ll have the whole system checked out
before this building closes tonight.”
The
two white coats tugged on Nicholas’s arms.
Mr.
Le Mare hugged his wife even tighter. “Oh, mon
dieu. Trapped in the elevator with a crazy man. I’ve been worried sick.”
“Jean,
please.” She glanced at him. Her face said sorry.
It
didn’t matter. The only opinion that mattered came from those who knew you. You
could spend years with some people, like his friends in white, and they didn’t
have a clue. A half hour with another person, and you gained a true friend for
life.
Her
husband grabbed her arm. “They said he wasn’t dangerous, but he’s delusional.”
“Is
that what they call it?” She smiled at Nicholas. “Maybe we should all be a
little more delusional.”
He’d
come so close to his surprise appearance at the Snow Ball, although only a
miracle would’ve made his solo entrance possible. She hadn’t needed his help—not
the way he first thought—but a gift had been given. And returned in kind.
Marie
waved. “Merry Christmas, Nicholas.”
“Merry
Christmas, Marie.”
They’d had fun, like two normal people. This
was a Christmas miracle he hadn’t counted on.
I
hope you enjoyed my contribution to Christmas Miracles. If you’d like to check
out my other stories and novels, please visit my web site at www.brendawhiteside.com.
Be
sure to visit us tomorrow for another Christmas Miracle from Jannine Gallant.
Wow, Brenda. You had me tearing up there. Wonderful story. A real keeper. Merry Christmas.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Margo. Glad you enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteClever twists at the end. People are always a puzzle, and their interesting aspects come out in tense situations...which is why suspense is such a good format! ...'and maybe we should all be a little delusional.' Well done, Brenda!
ReplyDeleteNothing is as it seems... I really enjoyed this! Thanks, Brenda.
ReplyDeleteLovely conclusion, Brenda. Great story. It's so true that "The only opinion that mattered came from those who knew you."
ReplyDeleteThere are people in our lives whose opinion matters most. A few we've allowed to control our opinions and some who we know right off couldn't offer a meaningful tip to our lives. I loved this story. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteWhat fun, Brenda, and totally original. That Marie was making ME manic in the elevator! I had no idea where this was going until it got there. Good job, and Merry Christmas!
ReplyDeleteThank you all, Rolynn, Jannine, Leah, Vonnie, and Alison.
ReplyDeleteA charming ending, Brenda. Nice twist.
ReplyDeleteGreat ending! I did not see that coming, but I LOVED it! Very sweet and fun story. Sad and humorous at the same time. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Diane. And thanks, Alicia.
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