Chapter One
Pulling
this off would take a Christmas miracle.
With an excited tremor, Nicholas punched the lobby button on the elevator keyboard. Twenty-four floors, then through the glass doors, and into a cab to arrive at the Snow Ball. As the doors glided toward each other, making his grand entrance into the ball flitted away when a small, manicured hand thrust through the sliver of an opening and bounced the doors apart.
With an excited tremor, Nicholas punched the lobby button on the elevator keyboard. Twenty-four floors, then through the glass doors, and into a cab to arrive at the Snow Ball. As the doors glided toward each other, making his grand entrance into the ball flitted away when a small, manicured hand thrust through the sliver of an opening and bounced the doors apart.
He
retreated to the back of the cube as the teenaged girl hopped onto the elevator.
Ignore her. She wouldn’t know him or
where he was going and couldn’t hinder his mission.
Rocking
a moment on the balls of her feet clad in shiny, black heels, she smiled—one of
those brief, close-mouthed polite smiles as the hallway disappeared and she
shifted, turning away from him. A subtle hum indicated they were moving.
Twenty-four, Twenty-three.
A
distant screech of scraping metal nearly drowned out the whisper of the
ebony-haired girl. “What was that?”
He
gripped the railing on the back wall with one hand while adjusting his white fur
trimmed, red hat with his other. The old elevator always groaned. Glints of
light from the track around the top edges of the elevator played across the
back of her hair, a reflection moving like the wave a crowd does at a football
game. Hmm, how long had it been since
he’d been to a ball game?
Another
creak, and she jumped. “Why have we stopped?” She darted a glance in his
direction. “Hey, what happened to the lights?”
The
darkness was blacker than a moonless night at the North Pole.
His
heart thumped against his ribs. Small spaces didn’t bother him. He lived in a
small space with small people. But an elevator malfunction would disrupt his
plan. Patience.
She
shuffled her feet. “It’s so quiet.”
“Don’t
worry.” The young one needed reassuring. “Someone will fix it.” He leaned his
hips against the railing that ran along the walls, the cold metal chilling his
bottom through his red dress slacks. The dark was so thick, so silent, if he’d
not seen the girl before the lights went out, he’d think he was alone. Except
for her annoying, spicy scent. The smell made his nose itch.
A distant growl of metal echoed from far
below them. A gasp from his unseen companion bounced around the blackness.
“Don’t
panic. How are we doing?”
“Fine,
if getting stuck in a dark elevator with a stranger is your idea of fun.” Her
caustic tone could indicate fear.
“The
darkness doesn’t change anything, so there’s no need for alarm.” He knew how to
handle unforeseen situations. “No reason to get excited.”
“This
is hardly exciting, and I’m not afraid of the dark.”
“Of
course you aren’t, child.”
“Child?
Listen, mister…”
“Just
stay calm!” So much needing his reassurance. Teenagers could be so difficult.
“All
right, all right.” The blackness didn’t mute her huff.
He
imagined her arms crossed, and her eyes glaring. Typical teen. He ran a finger
between his neck and the collar of his shirt. The dark grew stuffy. He
should’ve been on his way, out the building. He needed a Christmas miracle, and
what he got instead was an obstacle.
“But
what do you think is going on?” Her voice, now quietly needy, slithered between
his thoughts.
“It’s
probably a power problem.”
“Oh,
really?”
Her
sarcasm wasn’t quiet. He could ignore it.
“We should call for help,” she suggested. “I
left my cell in my purse in the office. Do you have yours?”
“No.”
Cell phones, email, and electronic voices. He shuddered. Why would he want to
be reached wherever he went? All messages
are delivered to the workshop. That was their job. He only checked them –
twice.
“Hey,
wait!” Her sudden outburst made him straighten up from his resting-place on the
railing. “The telephone! All elevators have telephones. It must be on this side
by the buttons.” Her scuffling noises shattered the dark.
“Stop.
You might touch something you shouldn’t.” He took a few steps in the direction
of the sounds of her movements and was startled when he bumped into her.
“Excuse me, but please don’t touch anything.”
“I’m
looking for the phone.”
“Tell
me what you find before you actually do anything.” Only inches from her, the
pitch-black took on her irritating scent. His nose twitched, and he took a
breath through his mouth. The darkness grew warmer. He loosened his tie.
“I
feel a metal door. This has to be it. Too bad I don’t read Braille.”
“Here,
let me see.” He reached out, amazed when his hand found the small oblong metal
door as she opened it.
“I
can do it!” An elbow knocked his hand away. “I’m perfectly capable of speaking
on a telephone.”
“Of
course, you’re capable.” How could he deal with such childishness? Yet, his lot
in life was exactly that. But the younger ones were so much easier to contain,
to appease, to please before they grew into double-digit ages.
“Hello,
hello. There’s no sound. No dial tone or anything. Hello!” This time she
screamed.
He
wiped the dampness from his forehead. Excitement, overzealous joy he could
handle, not panic. “Now, will you let me
have it?”
A
hard thump hit his chest as she relinquished the phone. In his ear, there was
silence, dead silence. With his other hand, he ran fingers around the perimeter
of the box and along the back. Cold metal. His nails snagged on six screws.
Nothing else. He’d never used an elevator phone. Never given any thought as to
how they operated. Maybe it was there for looks only, giving a false sense of
security to the occupants, like the pretend cameras or plastic phones he
delivered. Or maybe an alarm to catch you for touching something you shouldn’t.
His hand jerked back. He fumbled, setting the receiver back on its cradle.
“It
might set off an alarm when you pick it up. Just wait.” Nothing. How long
should he wait? There was a crackle overhead. The Carpenters harmonized, Away in a Manger. At least something was fixed.
“This is progress, right?” Her voice sounded hopeful.
“This is progress, right?” Her voice sounded hopeful.
Setting
his finger aside of his nose, he raised his gaze upward, but only black met
him. He wondered if a panel in the ceiling could be slid away.
“Right?”
“Hmm…yes,
progress.” He’d nearly forgotten about her with his musings.
Overhead
the lights flickered, went out, then shined and held. Although dim, his relief
flashed bright.
Her
dark brown eyes widened as she scanned their surroundings as if searching for what?
More people? She bit her dark red lower lip, which clashed with her neon orange
dress. He didn’t like orange, a poor imitation of red.
“Well!”
She tilted her chin in his direction. “Music. Lights. Now where’s the camera?
Since when doesn’t an elevator have a security camera?”
He
surveyed every corner. She was right. After two years, or was it four years,
going in and out of this building, he had never noticed there weren’t cameras
in the elevators. They must be hidden. No good watching people if they knew you
were watching.
She
walked around the compartment, corner to corner. “It may be my imagination, but
I think this contraption is broken.” Sarcasm again.
“Well,
it certainly isn’t moving.” He tried to match her wit.
“Do
you think it could fall?”
“It
isn’t even moving.”
“But,
do you think, if I were to move around too much, it would fall?”
His
abilities might be taxed in dealing with her. His skills had been limited to
reaffirming belief—fireside chats with children—not survival techniques with
teenagers. Where was his Christmas miracle? “No, of course not.”
“How
do you know?”
He
gave her his most authoritative expression. He hoped. Jolly wouldn’t work in
this instance. “It’s easy to get upset in such situations.”
The
girl cocked her head to one side. “Do I look
like I’m upset?”
He
stroked his close-cropped beard, still unhappy about having to cut it. He
stared at a sassy smile on a pale face dusted with freckles. He opened his
mouth to answer when the elevator gave a jolt. Knocked off balance, he stumbled
and caught himself on the metal railing.
The
girl gasped, but kept her balance, throwing her hands to her chest. He saw the
time on her watch. Damn. They’d miss him at the Snow Ball, and they’d come
looking. The elevator creaked, the lights flickered and the dark enveloped them
again.
“They
must be trying to fix it.” She sounded hopeful.
He
stood perfectly still, listening for noise beyond their breathing, but the only
sound was Barry Manilow crooning overhead.
“Kill.
The. Elevator. Music.” Each word rose
in pitch until she was screeching. “Why play music if the stupid thing isn’t
moving?”
He understood
her irritation. Jingle Bells should
not be crooned.
Again,
the lights blinked and this time stayed on, dimmer than before. His eyes
adjusted to the semi-darkness. Agitation wrinkled her forehead.
Despite
their situation, joy should fill their lives, not needless negative moodiness.
His plans could fall through, but he should be jolly. He swallowed,
ill-equipped to deal with her age group, but he’d give it a shot. “Does the
music upset you?”
“It
makes me manic!” She threw her hands in the air.
Please
come back tomorrow for chapter two!
11 comments:
Very intriguing, Brenda! Questions. Questions. Is she really a teen, or is that just his perception from an advanced (immortal?) age? And is he really you-know-who? And why does he need a miracle? You've hooked me!
Oh good Leah. I might say, nothing is as it seems...or is it?
My favorite line: All messages are delivered to the workshop. That was their job. He only checked them – twice. Great!
LOL Thanks, Christine.
I liked "Jingle Bells should not be crooned." Gas fireplaces, cranky elevators...old Nick has a right to be grumbling...obstacles instead of miracles...yes! Well done, Brenda!
My favorite... "He lived in a small space with small people." Perfect. He's either Santa or the Wizard of Oz. LOL Great opening, and your portrayal of the girl is excellent.
How fun!! I'm definitely hooked. SO many questions. Clever and humorous opening. Great job!!
Her voice, now quietly needy, slithered between his thoughts. Love that line. Doesn’t get more intrusive than that. Great beginning, Brenda. Simply great.
Absolutely loved this first chapter! Will be back tomorrow.
What a great first chapter! I love all the different directions this opening line is taking.
I like hearing your favorite lines! Thanks, Rolynn and Jannine. And Alicia and Margo. Thank you Margo and Vonnie. And yes, this line has sent us all over the place.
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